Shattered Mirrors ~POTW 2-17-07~
Shattered Mirrors, by Liliththedevotedone Sweet scent of rotting meat, as ashes fall from above. Echoing screams in the daylight. Failure in the hearts of two. Left behind in a world with no home. In...
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Chia... this left me stunned and shaken. Well writ and eerily bound...
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Wow !! stunning of sounds of decay !! Quote:Sweet scent of rotting meat, as ashes fall from above. Isn't this an amazing start !! all in horror._________________________________________________ Musann...
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thanks loves glad u enjoyed it ^-^ i enjoyed writing this I had this idea in my head for sometime and i didnt know hwo to start it and then tada! it came to me and here it is in all its glory. if you...
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Quote:Tears betray the beauty. Shattering the mirrors with a knife. Shattering the mirrors for the horrors arrive. The death of a brother, leaves this little one behind. Her one true friend is this...
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"The beginnings of death is not in life. It is in the mirrors, where the demons reside." Very well framed words of wisdom, dear poetess!!!
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Like you already know, this is one of your best. You know I love your work, so I'm not surprised at all that you could come up with something so beautifully dark. Congrats!
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really intense! "A mans fate is a mans fate and life is but an illusion.""Swift as the wind, silent as the forest, fierce as the fire, immovable as the mountain.""The one fallen to darkness"
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Wow!!! this is most overwhelming piece to read.....i am most impressed by its creation.....
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I read this over, and this part really stood out to me after reading it twice... Quote:Do not trust others, for they do not trust you. Do not trust love, it just leaves you behind. just awesome! *my...
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Hi, Enjoyed the way you infused the rage and intensity to bring out a surge of poetic shadowy undertones. Magnetically this piece is gripping from the first line to the last. Congratulations on Poem...
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Congrats on this honor, Lilith !! much deserved._________________________________________________ Musann - Home of the Unsigned Rock and Metal Bands
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great poem...interesting mix with the other one could have been two people
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Ok I guess I should give up on the contest!?! Theres a new Queen of poetry and her name is Crista ! Your wise beyond your years and I shutter to think what you might think up next! I can not believe...
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umm thank u lol wow i dont think im that great thanks very much whendt! and Roger and scorp!
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